This was her fifth visit despite it being only the second day of the week.
However she wasn’t coming for another refill. Instead, this time she would either be walking out with a Valentine or empty-handed.
She had been working up the courage all morning to visit and as she approached the counter, she felt her hands begin to sweat at the barista’s beaming face.
Throughout their usual exchanged of pleasant small talk, she couldn’t help but admire the light crinkles beside their eyes, the shaggy style of their brown hair, and the confidence yet tenderness in their voice.
The perfect sight in front of her may probably be the highlight of her day, depending on how the next few seconds go.
A lull fell between them.
Now was the moment.
She parted her lips and let the words come out.
“Ermβ¦Alex, I was wondering, would you like to go out with me on Sunday?” she asked shyly, her fingers crossed by her sides. Her heart raced faster with each passing and unanswered moment.
The female barista’s smile widened and her green eyes sparkled. “Sure. On one condition – let’s go to a different coffee shop.”
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Thank you for reading this piece and I’m really happy that you like it! π I appreciate your comment. Hope you are having a lovely start to your week β₯
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That was a cute read! Is there more to the story π
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There may be a small continuation in the future π I have an idea brewing and come back to this soon…Thank you for reading this flash fiction, I’m so happy that you enjoyed it πβ€π
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Wish I had that courage. I have too much fear of rejection. Good story. π
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Me too…I have the same fear so we’re on the same boat! Thank you for reading and for your comment π I’m happy that you liked the story! π
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