At first, she thought his pet names were cute and endearing.
She loved being his ‘babe’, ‘darling’, and ‘love’.
That was until she noticed that he had a habit of casually calling other women the same. “Want a beer, babe?” or “Thanks, love.”
One evening at a party, she caught him chatting in the corner with another woman.
As she approached them, she overheard their conversation end with “bye, darling.”
“Who is she?” she gestured with a nod towards the departing woman.
He pecked her lips, chuckling. “I don’t know,” he replied truthfully and took a gulp of his beer. “Called her ‘darling’ because I can’t remember.”
She looks at him suspiciously and raises an eyebrow. “What’s my name?”
He took a guess.
It was wrong.
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This hits right in the feels! Great writing.
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Thank you for reading and for your kind comment! I’m so happy to hear that you liked it 🤗💗
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I am sworn off of pet names now 😉 Clever piece of writing. Thank you!
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😂😂😂 Time to start questioning pet names! Your comment really made me smile! ❤😊 I’m so thrilled that you liked his piece of flash fiction 🤗
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I gasped at the end this is so good!
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Aww, thank you so much!!! ♡ I’m appreciate you reading this story and incredible flattered that the ending surprised you 😊
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Ouch…
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😂😂😂 Thank you for reading! 💗
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Haha my pleasure!
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Good one. Very funny.
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Thank you Brandon 💕 I’m so happy you liked this story and found it amusing 🤗
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Those last two lines! 🙂
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Hahaha! I am so delighted that you like the last two lines 😄♥
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So funny 😄
I love the chuckle.
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Thank you, Lokesh! I’m so glad that you enjoyed this story 🤗 Your support means a whole lot to me ♡
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Ooof! That’s rough! I loved the twist at the end.
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😂😂😂 Love your comment! ♡ Thank you for reading this story and I’m thrilled that you like the little surprise at the end 😊
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Rings true. My dad once couldn’t remember his fianceé’s (my mother’s) name when introducing her!
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Aww, bless your Dad! That’s a really amusing story 😂 Thank you for sharing! 💕😄
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Keeo writing good content.👍
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Thank you, dear friend 🤗
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You said so much in just ten lines. That is a ‘gift’.
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Thank you for reading and your kinds words, I really appreciate it ❤ So happy that you liked this short story! 🤗😂
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I liked that snappy ending – one that completely caught me off guard! Well done!
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Thank you for reading, I’m really glad to hear that you liked the ending and that it caught you off guard 😊😂 Sending lots of love! ♡
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Wow. This struck a chord😂
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Oh my! 😂😂 Thank you for reading and happy that you liked this post! 🤗
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I enjoyed this – an unexpected laugh at the end. Thank you 🙂
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I’m so happy to hear that you liked this story and it made you laugh! 🤗 Thank you so much for reading and your comment 💗 I am really grateful. Hope you are having a lovely weekend ✨
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Some people have a real problem with remembering names 😉
But seriously, I love what you were able to express with just a few words!
Thank you for making me smile 🙂
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That is true! 💗 Thank you for reading this flash fiction, I’m really grateful for your compliment 🤗 Happy to hear that this made you smile! Hope you have a lovely day 🤩
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It hits different.. kinda both sad and amusing
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It is a disheartening and amusing situation to find yourself in. Thank you for reading and leaving a comment 😊 I hope you liked this drabble! ♡
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It’s a pleasure☺️
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💕💕💕
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Haha! Nice one!
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Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. I’m so happy to hear that you enjoyed it! 😄💕
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Brilliant!
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Thank you Lorne! 🤗 I’m flattered to hear that you liked it. Hope you are having a lovely start to the week 💕
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Lovely! It’s 3:38 am here in Minnesota and you managed to make me smile! Thanks for that!!
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Aww, your message made me smile, Debs!! 😄 I take this as a high accomplishment to make someone smile so early in the morning 💗 Thank you for reading this story and I’m beyond thrilled to hear that you liked it 🤗
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lol reminds me of a kdrama I just watched, love this so much! Write more please hugs ok I think I’m caught up hugs
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Oh really? That’s awesome! 😂 What kdrama was it? Thank you for reading this writing and commenting on my other posts 💕 I’m flattered that you like them and will try to write more fiction pieces. Tight hugs back to you! 🤗 Your support is a huge motivation x
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It was actually a c-drama called Be with You with Ji Xiao Bing and Zhang Ya Qin I absolutely loved it and finished it in a day
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Interesting! I will look up that kdrama, it sounds like a real binge-worthy show 😋 Thank you for telling me, dear friend! 💗
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